My ex and I (back when we were dating) did some shoots together. It was good fun and I learned a lot. Thought id share a pair with you guys.
I know the makeup is a little 'high fashion' so please don't bother saying you don't like the color of makeup...it was her choice.
They were shot with continuous light. Canon EOS 20D

Id love to hear what you all think.

 

I like the first one a lot.

My only thing to point out is that her forehead is a lot hotter then the rest of her skin...kinda sticks out.

2nd image looks nice enough...but is boring.

Since you were using continuous light. Did you have any diffusion on?