quite a few of michelle.
01-24-2010, 08:56 AM
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Nice...
01-24-2010, 08:59 AM
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#2 with the scrunchy face is the best in that series.
Shows a cute playful girl, composition is really good. Nice sparkle in her eyes, great depth of field.
#3 is a bit of an awkward angle, maybe a tad too high.
The last one of the legs, I get what youre trying to do, but the legs arent really posed and it feel like you just cut the body in half.
Overall, mucho improvement over the last set. Keep it up!
Shows a cute playful girl, composition is really good. Nice sparkle in her eyes, great depth of field.
#3 is a bit of an awkward angle, maybe a tad too high.
The last one of the legs, I get what youre trying to do, but the legs arent really posed and it feel like you just cut the body in half.
Overall, mucho improvement over the last set. Keep it up!
01-25-2010, 10:18 PM
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maybe 29 palms isnt so bad after all 
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01-27-2010, 04:22 PM
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i actually didnt do anything to her eyes at all...as soon as i met her i was trippin on her eyes..shes a total cutie,and flirtyy. we hit it off on a flirty level way before we talked about photography (which is when i found out she wanted to shoot).
thanks for the kudos! and yes miz,this place has its DAYS..lol not much more than that tho.
thanks for the kudos! and yes miz,this place has its DAYS..lol not much more than that tho.
01-27-2010, 04:50 PM
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Very nice and a big improvement over the last set (boudoir). The lighting and poses and Point of View are much better.
They could still use a little less DOF, but I know you are limited on your aperture. Also, watch the backgrounds to try and keep them less busy.
They could still use a little less DOF, but I know you are limited on your aperture. Also, watch the backgrounds to try and keep them less busy.
(kitchen area)
01-27-2010, 06:11 PM
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The photos of her make her appear almost as if she were an illustration. And if that illustration were photoshopped. and then one took a picture of that photoshopped image.
01-27-2010, 06:21 PM
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