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Old Aug 7, 2010 | 04:34 PM
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Jenelle

Haven't posted an portraits in awhile. So here's Jenelle!

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<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/haycon/4868012720/" title="Jenelle by haycon, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4135/4868012720_5c6b56dc57_o.jpg" width="1000" height="664" alt="Jenelle" border="3" /></a>

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<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/haycon/4867396931/" title="Jenelle by haycon, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4117/4867396931_02d014719e_o.jpg" width="1000" height="664" alt="Jenelle" border="3" /></a>

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<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/haycon/4867396991/" title="Jenelle by haycon, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4136/4867396991_b3020a4922_o.jpg" width="1000" height="664" alt="Jenelle" border="3" /></a>

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<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/haycon/4869549122/" title="Jenelle by haycon, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4118/4869549122_acac791ec5_o.jpg" width="664" height="1000" alt="Jenelle" border="3" /></a>

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<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/haycon/4868012830/" title="Jenelle by haycon, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4102/4868012830_389319aed2_o.jpg" width="664" height="1000" alt="Jenelle" border="3" /></a>
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Old Aug 7, 2010 | 04:45 PM
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Old Aug 7, 2010 | 04:49 PM
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Quality of the pics are solid as usual.

2 C&C:

1) pics 1 & 5 accentuate her left eye being higher than her right eye with her head tilted.. Feels unbalanced.

2) pic 5 catches her jaw at a weird angle.
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Old Aug 7, 2010 | 05:58 PM
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They look better than anything I can take!

I don't know if it's just personal preference, but the way the focus is on the first few pictures makes it look like she was photo-shopped into the photo (she's focused VERY clearly while the background is a complete blur). The 3rd one is better since it has a foreground, but back at her head it looks like it's been photo-shopped. Maybe a soft focus effect would help with making it look more natural...

Also is it me or does her dress/shirt in the last photo have some funky colors going on in the bottom right above the 2nd wrinkle? (Yellow/Blue tinges)
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Old Aug 7, 2010 | 06:04 PM
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shallow focus is inherent to portrait photography. I think it looks very natural.
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Old Aug 7, 2010 | 06:38 PM
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Old Aug 8, 2010 | 10:38 PM
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another co-worker?

very nicely done
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Old Aug 9, 2010 | 08:26 AM
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Old Aug 9, 2010 | 08:37 AM
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#5 is sexy as hell
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Old Aug 9, 2010 | 08:39 AM
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Originally Posted by rimz
another co-worker?

very nicely done
Heheh... nah. First time I've met her.
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Old Aug 9, 2010 | 10:00 AM
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I love all of these. There was one other shot on your flickr, the dark one... That one is my fave.
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Old Aug 9, 2010 | 11:38 AM
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Good photos Conrad...as we come to expect from you.

I really can't find anything to critique about these photos, as they have a professional look to them imho. I would say that she should have blended her blush more on her cheeks to help soften her face and avoid the somewhat harsh transitions in her makeup. Other than that...very well done!
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Old Aug 9, 2010 | 11:40 AM
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Old Aug 9, 2010 | 12:06 PM
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I love all of these. There was one other shot on your flickr, the dark one... That one is my fave.
excellent pics and yes, the dark / shadowy one has a great lighting effect... bravo!
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Old Aug 9, 2010 | 01:23 PM
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Thanks everyone. I think the dark photo you guys are talking about is this one.

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/haycon/4867757076/" title="Jenelle by haycon, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4098/4867757076_f7714a2421_o.jpg" width="664" height="1000" alt="Jenelle" /></a>
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Old Aug 9, 2010 | 01:26 PM
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OMG shes sexy.

Your work aint too shabby either!
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Old Aug 10, 2010 | 12:21 AM
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Old Aug 10, 2010 | 08:01 AM
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Beautiful shots!
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Old Aug 10, 2010 | 11:48 AM
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well done. Color and lighting
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Old Aug 18, 2010 | 10:45 AM
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Well done shots-pretty young lady.
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