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Sarlacc 01-07-2013 05:21 PM

Product Photography Practice - Critique and Comment welcomed
 
Decided I needed to try my hand at some product shots, and what better product than one of the knives I received by licensing an older photo.

Ideally I would have had a larger work space and an additional light or two (I had two lights - daylight balanced LED panels)

But I'm pretty happy with the results seeing as I have no experience with shooting product.

Critique is welcome.

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...hun/Shun-1.jpg

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...hun/Shun-9.jpg

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...un/Shun-10.jpg

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...hun/Shun-2.jpg

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...hun/Shun-3.jpg

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...hun/Shun-4.jpg

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...hun/Shun-5.jpg

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...hun/Shun-6.jpg

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...hun/Shun-7.jpg

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Sarlacc 01-07-2013 05:23 PM

I think one thing I walked away with was the need for deeper focus when the vegetables are involved. Really need more/larger light source for that as I wanted to keep the ISO under 1250 (ideally around 500-800 or less)

This would be an area where I would start exploring what flash or strobes could do for me.

Also, the macro shot of the handle, not sure why I added that. It doesn't really convey anything.

Sarlacc 01-07-2013 05:25 PM

And I think I need to chop the first cut tomato shot.

MWalsh9152 01-07-2013 05:54 PM

not a bad start Dave! I really like the composition, as well as the DOF on the shot with the peppers. The colors really grab you on this one.

Ive been wanting to try my hand at something like this for a while. I have a shot in mind that would look awesome in my office, it would be a crop of one of our newer control boards which has the company logo embossed on it. I just dont have the lighting, and free money to put into lights just because

Sarlacc 01-07-2013 05:57 PM

Thanks...luckily I was able to borrow the lights from a friend.

2001AudiS4 01-07-2013 06:02 PM

You suck

Sarlacc 01-07-2013 06:05 PM


Originally Posted by 2001AudiS4 (Post 14248965)
You suck

:sad:

2001AudiS4 01-07-2013 06:18 PM


Originally Posted by Sarlacc (Post 14248968)
:sad:

:D In all seriousness, I think they came out great. One thing I like, which doesn't necessarily have to do with the knife itself, is how well the texture of the cutting board shows, right down to the knife marks. I think it really adds to the pictures.

MWalsh9152 01-07-2013 06:21 PM

yeah, the dark texture of the wood really makes the food stand out too

terdonal 01-07-2013 06:38 PM

In the first one the background is too busy and detracts from the nice shot of the knife. The first one with the peppers needs balanced dof on the peppers as does the first one with the lemons and lime. The rest of them look pretty good to my eyes, overall nice for your first attempt.

pttl 01-07-2013 07:41 PM

I think backgrounds are very important in product shots. If the background doesn't have anything to do directly with the product it shouldn't be in the shot. That's why the first pic here is distracting. Even the stove grids are borderline out of place. Even though cutting and chopping is a cooking event the act of using the knife is not usually done on a stove. The block and produce are outstanding examples of cohesive backgrounding.

just mho. :) Beautiful pics though.

Sarlacc 01-07-2013 08:04 PM


Originally Posted by terdonal (Post 14249017)
In the first one the background is too busy and detracts from the nice shot of the knife. The first one with the peppers needs balanced dof on the peppers as does the first one with the lemons and lime. The rest of them look pretty good to my eyes, overall nice for your first attempt.

noted and I agree, thanks :thumbsup:

mdkxtreme 01-07-2013 10:39 PM

I agree that the color of the cutting board looks like a perfect "background" for the food and knife.

I'm not sure if this is correct, but would a cutting board without the knife marks be better? I might just be pixel peeping but some of the cutting lines kinda stand out.

But again like 2001AudiS4 said, some might view the cutting lines as a neat addition.

Sarlacc 01-07-2013 10:40 PM


Originally Posted by mdkxtreme (Post 14249431)
I'm not sure if this is correct, but would a cutting board without the knife marks be better? I might just be pixel peeping but some of the cutting lines kinda stand out.

If this were a real shoot for a client, you are correct that the cutting board would probably be brand new...pending on what they wanted.

cmschmie 01-08-2013 06:03 AM

Look good to me, but I'm no advertisement executive.

I seem to remember Dan Martin (who I haven't seen on here in forever), doing some product photography. Maybe he'd be someone good to contact

Undying Dreams 01-08-2013 10:44 AM

The macro shots are awesome, the closeup of the blade made me :what:

And as you already pointed out, with the veggies involved, more DOF :)

Looks like you're off to a good start :thumbsup:

Sarlacc 01-08-2013 12:48 PM

I re-cropped and re-processed the first image in hopes of making it less distracting

https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8232/...93986b34_o.jpg

asianspec 01-08-2013 01:02 PM

i like.


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