LOBDGTTYPES

Just a quick commercial my brother and I put together last sunday..

The phone number that comes up is my work..


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PZG5D4uOpFQ

princelybug

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crazyasiantl

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pretty cool

compewterbleu

Nate Dog! Damn! LOL!

tharbemiko

very nice haha

Outlaw06

Too cheesy. Also, lose the plate while making a commercial.

PsychDoc

Great. Very creative. Lose the horrible hip hop crap. Makes it appear you're marketing to gansta wannabes.

Colin

From a technical perspective: You should get a tripod. If you're doing the "Top Gear" type beauty shots, IMO, the camera shouldn't shake. Audio: sounds like an on-camera mic and is pretty 'echoy' in the garage. Music: LOL everyone is a music critic, but I'd consider something more "neutral" But overall, it's a good effort.

LubDub

+1

MurkyRiversTL

I like the effort, but as stated before, it could be better (well not in those same words but its the general idea lol)

LOBDGTTYPES

This commercial was just made on a little camera more as something to do then anything else..more of a joke..thanks for the positive comments though.. we are not trying to be professionals as a reminder to the professionals who are out there..

MurkyRiversTL

Cool Joke?? I dont think anyone assumed it was a professional commercial, the quality speaks for itself, but they were just suggestions to make a better..... joke.... or commercial.

LOBDGTTYPES

just thought i would share..thats all...geeezzzz everyone is soo serious around here..

Rugel

looks cool man!! Chill out people...

LOBDGTTYPES

thanks man..the Nate Dogg was just something i thought of from "the Transporter" thought it would be good

Colin

LOL, nobody's being too serious. If you want it to be better, there are areas that are easy and not hard (or expensive) to implement. If you like it as is, that's fine too since its your project.

legend74

I can tell by your age that you're probably lost in the 60's or 70's and haven't found your way back to the current decade. :p

jmaikamon

+1....what he said!

PsychDoc

LOL Nah, I go right up to the 80's and even some 90's. After that I've only found a few things that I like.

C'mon now. you can't tell me there's anyone around who can stand toe to toe with the Beatles, Stones, Genesis, Yes, Soundgarden, Supertramp and, most of all, Hendrix!

RSLTSX09XMNAVWX

[quote=LOBDGTTYPES;12302675]Just a quick commercial my brother and I put together last sunday..

The phone number that comes up is my work..

I was waiting for the Action Scene where you drive the car off the roof of the garage into the river like Batman Did in Dark Knight!! Other then that, good job! Music works for me, even ay 62!

Rocketsfan

You probably lost about 70% of the demographic at 0:48. LOL! Oh, and you spelled "interrupted" wrong. I know you're just having fun with it, though, and it's nice to see something different and original in here, so - nice job!